December 11, 2007

Correct me , so that i can reciprocate

I feel bad, when i think about myself,
I never felt complete in my mind shelf.
I never like mistakes as my identity,
I cared much about my image and dignity.

My parents were very proud during my school days,
I bring prestige to their brought up always.
But nowadays i feel myself in a platform,
That suddenly takes a court form.

My friends consider me as a wrong doer,
How can i prove myself to this sayer.
I never regret that i did mistakes,
There are no one with empty stakes.

I welcome you all to point out my wrong,
I ll act on those stuff really strong.
Help in seeking a way for me to locate,
So that i can reciprocate.

17 comments:

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Deepa said...

Can i comment this way ??

Your desire to reciprocate
Reveals values and principles
That parent’s alone inculcate
         Care not, for idle rebuke
         Fret not, on failed attempt
         Ponder on the point you missed
Mistakes teach values too
Evading them is, not to try
Victory eludes, when we fail to try

Unknown said...

Lifes most importand questions always ends with paradox. I was touched by your poem, mostly because it reminds me of myself. I have learned to axcept that it is not posible to be all knowing with my tiny brain. I've learned to just try to do what's right.

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Hey Raja,

Everyone of us can feel something like that at point of our lives. The good news is that, you can always believe in yourself. Have faith in who you really are.

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What a very thought provoking poem.

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